Audience Feedback

When you screened the rough cut version of your video to the class what areas of the video did you still want to complete/ improve and why?

As a group 

• We still needed to complete a title for our film as we did not add one in yet or think of a title that we could use. 
• We still needed to add credits so people watching the film knows the roles of who did what and also to give recognition to people outside our group for helping us with the short film.
• We needed to improve the lighting of some shots as inside the cargo container scenes are very dark, which we did not notice when we were filming as on the camera it was a lot lighter and darkness that was shown on the camera gave off a sinisterly effect.
• We still need to think of different types of music we could use to put into the short film as we did not feel like the running scenes were as creepy as the scenes in the cargo.

What positive feedback did you get from the audience?

• They like that we included a news cast which warns people to what is happening in the area.
• They liked the music we used at the beginning as they were aware that the music being played is what Shorai was listening to when she was jogging through the forest.

What were the suggested areas to improve on from the audience?

• Even though some people were aware that the music at the beginning was what Shorai was listening to, some people were not aware and they want it to be more clearer that it is something Shorai is listening to rather than random background noise.
• They suggested to improve the lighting in the cargo container so it is easier to view what is happening within the cargo container.
• To shorten the noise of the dragging of the pole as the sound goes on for to long in a confined space. 
• To change the words used in the radio broadcast to make it clearer about what is happening in the area.